Possible media artifacts I would use for my e-portfolio would include photos, links, notes, and drawings. I would consider myself a creative individual and I would definitely add photos of the scenery I study best in, which would most likely be outdoors. I also enjoy filming, perhaps I could film the place in which I study the most. Because my favorite way of taking notes is through writing with a pen, while using paper, I would post a picture of my notes. As well as using my notes, I would use links that inspire my writing process or past essays and poetry depending on the assignment, that inspire me. I mentioned posting drawings, sometimes when I doodle it helps me come up with ideas for my writing process. Although it can be a bit of a distraction it is the process I go through in order to have my brain function. I could also use audio clips of feedback that someone gives me in a certain essay or notes that the person gives me.

In this paper, I had a good descriptive title, and I need to work on my grammar usage. I definitely made numerous punctuation and grammatical errors that I need to work on, it is what I struggle with the most. I also didn’t introduce my sources well enough and could have been more descriptive. As well as being more descriptive, I didn’t use the proper format when typing my paper. I can correct these issues by not only looking over the rubric that was given but by reviewing basic grammar structure in OWL. I am working on sentence structure and grammar by figuring out what day I can go to OWL. I can get a better grade by revising my work and making sure I follow the rubric.

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