In this paper, I had a good descriptive title, and I need to work on my grammar usage. I definitely made numerous punctuation and grammatical errors that I need to work on, it is what I struggle with the most. I also didn’t introduce my sources well enough and could have been more descriptive. As well as being more descriptive, I didn’t use the proper format when typing my paper. I can correct these issues by not only looking over the rubric that was given but by reviewing basic grammar structure in OWL. I am working on sentence structure and grammar by figuring out what day I can go to OWL. I can get a better grade by revising my work and making sure I follow the rubric.