From writing this piece I learned that brainstorming can be very beneficial when deciding on a topic to write about for a research topic or any paper in general.  Brainstorming is beneficial because then one has the ability to write upon a topic that either interests them a lot or to write upon a topic that they have slight knowledge on. This all just puts one at an advantage later on when it comes to actually writing the paper and conducting more research to enhance one’s current knowledge. Earlier in the semester I would not have been able to look at this assignment and see the uniqueness in it, but as mentioned above after revising it all came to make sense to me.

In regards to the changes that I made to the new revised copy I would like to start off with mentioning that I cleaned the work up and got rid of unnecessary wording. Also, I updated my thesis and elaborated on some things to make the topic and question clear. Since I began the project there really has not been any changes in the way that I think in terms of the topic. To revise this paper all I did was read over it and go over specific parts that I felt needed work. From completing this assignment I learned that every time one re-reads there work there is always a flaw that can be changed.