Critical Response #1

  • What did I do well in this paper?
  • What do I need to work on?
  • Where can I go for help with errors?
  • What have I done to educate myself about this specific problem?
  • How can I get a better grade next time?

I did well in analyzing the given sources and stating a point. I need to work on my grammar, sentence structures, quoting, and a better title. I can go for help with errors by using purdue owl and the reference book. I educated myself about these problems by reading my own essay again in depth and reviewing the comments that I was given. I can get a better grade by remembering the guidelines and basically writing better in general.