I’ve learned that whenever you refer to a source, you should use in-text citations and add in a works cited page. In-text citations and a works cited page work in tandem with each other and it allows the reader to refer to the original sources to do more research or confirm the credibility of the writing. I did minor changes to grammatical errors and sentence structure. I found that I was too concise in my writing and I did not elaborate on my points more. There was very little of my analysis going into this piece, I was just summarizing what the pieces said. I added more of my own analysis and thoughts after each summarization to fully argue my points. Reading the piece over again allowed me to understand its weakness of analysis. I still agree with my points in this essay and I have learned that reading and writing coincides with one another. To write, you must be able to read, to read, you must be able to write.