When looking over the corrections for my movie review, I saw that there was only a correction suggested on the paper was to revise the title to give a clear indication that it is a movie review. Past that the revisions were completely my own.
The largest revision aside from minor grammar and diction changes, was the addition of a body paragraph. This paragraph was used to enhance the critical analysis of the movie that I thought was slightly lacking in the initial copy. The other paragraphs were mainly focused on the story line while the new paragraph ties that into a technique used by Rosenstein. This added to the quality of the paper because it allowed the flow to closer resemble a review.