Again, I did not need to revise a significant amount. I did check for passive voice and expletive constructions that I struggle most with. I believe that I did not revise very much because I was previously taught my senior year of high school how to do a detailed annotated bibliography. Because of the annotated bibliography, I still remember what most of my sources arguments were even if I do not remember the actual article name.

My prezi for my research proposal was very organized and clear, but did not include a lot of multimedia that is now included in the prezi. Nothing has changed except the addition of pictures.