After viewing most of my assignments I see that big issues of mine are conclusions and grammar. In a couple of my papers I have noticed that I have a hard time wrapping a pretty bow around most of papers. I do not know how to close out well without seeming rushed, repetitive, or simple. It is like my conclusion just does not keep up with the rest of my paper.

I have also learned that I sometimes talk in passive voice to make my writing sound more sophisticated, but I usually end up sounding even worse. Passive voice usually just leads to bunch of unnecessary words that have the potential to just confuse readers. I now see the importance of writing in active voice.