I enjoyed reading “The Power of Hello”, by Howard White. Reading this story was an interesting read that really hit home.  I believe I complicated the assignment and didn’t really comprehend the assignment to the fullest. I made some grammatical errors, and some sentences were just dubious or too complex. I must learn to organize my thought better than I am doing currently. The work that I tend to turn in that I am nervous I am scoring better on than others. My main concern was not having a simple and boring sentence structure with no flow. This “Power of Hello” assignment felt that the sentences could have been a lot better. Even though I enjoyed the reading I really didn’t have a lot of passion of writing response. I don’t know if was the fact that I haven’t come to terms that I was in college, or just being a victim of poor writing.

My major was I believe it was a truly a train wreck, I couldn’t quite grasp what I was supposed to do. When I had the chance to look over someone else’s paper I got some clarity but not really any more confident in the Rhetorical analysis. My paper was more off into left field, and should have used the words professor Hays gave us. I thinking more brain storming and reviewing is the solution for this. Hopefully I can overcome this and move forward with this next paper.