In my second essay doing the proposal the first time I ran into trouble finding a clear question I wanted to answer with my thesis. Now that I have that it wasn’t really hard saying what I wanted to. Grammatical errors seem to be a constant theme in my papers despite proof reading, it could be a case of reading too fast. During my revision I had to alter my sources, despite going to a engine plenty of times and going back to my data bases some information is lacking.

The points I tend to get across sometimes come off vague and unclear.  I constantly consult the rubric to make sure I hit all of the point the paper is asking for. Also making sure my thoughts make sense not leaving any words out by mistake. Like my other essay consulting the other mini lessons, and the hand book for things such as passive voice, and sentence fragments. My workshop group gave me good feedback also when trying to revise my paper on top of the grading. I went back to my earlier drafts to revisit what direction I was going with some of my thoughts.