Research Paper Revision

Hello! I have attached to this page my revision for my research paper. I have also highlighted all the changes that I made to this paper. If you are interested in the thought process behind my revisions, please visit the “Reflections” tab.

Behind the Screen: Dangers in The loss of Privacy; Research Paper – Revised

Behind the Screen: Dangers in The loss of Privacy; Research Paper – Revised PDF

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Professor Hay’s Revisions – Research Paper PDF

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