Artifact Analysis Revision

Hello writers! I have attached to this page my revision for my Analysis paper. I have also highlighted the changes that I have made. If you are interested in the thought process behind my revisions, please visit the “Reflections” tab.

 

Artifact Analysis; Providing For The Welfare Of The Students Revised

Artifact Analysis; Providing For The Welfare Of The Students Revised – PDF

Rubric:

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Professor Hay’s Comments:

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Professor Hay’s Revisions:

Professor Hay’s Revisions: Artifact Analysis PDF

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