I have learned many things from my first essay. The most prominent lesson being my grammatical errors. Based on the “feedback to the learner” I was able to review my subject-verb agreement , as well as my apostrophe use.I also realized that I should expand on some of my discussions. At the end of the semester I will first re-think my title. In the comments professor Mary found my title intriguing ,but confusing. I will also include in-text citations, something I was missing entirely. Lastly. I will change my whole conclussion. I feel as if my conclusion was very rushed andbiased.