I came out to very good start on my paper with a strong and mysterious title. I also did a good job of introducing sources, and connecting them to both my personal life and other sources. I did not do so well in the grammar aspect of my paper. Although slight, there are a handful of grammatically issues that I can work on through different passages in my student handbook. My handbook, a Writer’s Reference, has many different explanations of some of my grammatical issues that I did not quite understand. My lowest score in my critical response was the grammar portion, for I plan on doing more reading on simple grammatically issues in my handbook. I will do this so that small grammar issues can be avoided in the future. Also, I will work on proofreading my papers more than once to ensure that I have not made any simple mistakes that could have been fixed if I had just read my paper more carefully.