I believe that I had good word choice and solid arguments in my Critical Response along with some very good word choice.  However, some of the phrases and statement that I used to back up my arguments were not very clear and can cause some confusion.  I believe that I had good evidence to support my ideas throughout the paper. I need to work on my wording for some of my arguments as it can come out unclear. To help myself with my errors, I can go to Professor Mary if necessary and I can also use resources on the internet such as the Purdue Owl. What I have done to help myself word my sentences better is look at my sentences and figure out how I can improve the sentence by using different words and also by using various online resources. I can get a better grade next time by introducing my sources  more properly, making sure I put the word count on the front page and to be a bit more clear and concise in my writing.