This assignment had two parts – Annotated Bibliography and Research Proposal
I did well on Research Proposal -Thanks to my visualization skills
However, I made various major mistakes on Annotated Bibliography.
I focus mainly on Annotated Bibliography to change formats and correct errors.
One of major issue with this assignment is citation formatting. I relied a lot on easybib.com or other auto citation machines available in internet, and I did not check the products from the program. After I found out that there was a lot of mistakes, such as missing dates, italicizing and so forth, I revised most of the citations in this paper. Moreover, some of my annotated bibliography was unclear. So I refined my sentences so that it delivers my idea more clearly.
On the proposal, I did not made any change, since I liked the proposal as is it now. I though about changing the thesis on the proposal, but I wanted to see how my research thesis changed as my research progresses. However, I did made little change on Research Proposal such as typos and grammatical errors.
This is links to my Annotated Bibliography and Research Proposal
Annotated bib