Critical Response #5: Synthesizing sources

This assignment is about synthesizing sources in writing.

This activity requires analyzing skills along with connecting the analysis of different sources.

I found various errors in formatting the in-text citation as well as citation. I also found some grammatical errors.

When I revise this paper, I corrected these errors.

I also rewrote my synthesis part as well. I found the my synthesis was little weak. I did not synthesized three sources at same time. So I wrote new paragraph that synthesize three sources.

This is my revised synthesis paper

synthesis