In reflecting on this paper for the revision, my first though was that I should probably finish it. It really only has one paragraph and the start of a second one.

For example, I should at least finish the thought about the onions: The stalks had fallen down but rather than drying as they usually do, making a handy handle to pull of the onion (and then later to braid it into long ropes to hang for curing), these had sort of rotted on the inside. Only a thin paper of rope surrounded the rotten green inner stalk, so that when I pulled, it broke in my hand, and then I had to dig the onion out of the hard earth.

Since your revision will be of a finished draft, your reflection will likely be more about the process of revisiting this draft, now armed with more knowledge of your own writing life and a greater understanding of your writing tools.