For my first critical response, I think i did well analyzing my sources and writing about them clearly. I am pleased with the substance of the paper. I did not know until looking at the rubric and the yellow comments that I was missing key components of the assignment. I should have looked at the rubric before writing the paper and I will definitely do that know. I did not include a title and I wrote the entire paper as one big paragraph. From now on I will make sure to view and understand the assignment in its entirety.