My Topic About WP#3

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As a Chinese student , I want to spread the troditional culture of my nature . So I write an article about the Chinese traditional culture carnival which was held in ZJUI and I had a happy time .

And I’m also curious about the life in UIUC , so I searched online at https://illinois.edu/ that Since its founding in 1867, the University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign has earned a reputation as a world-class leader in research, teaching, and public engagement. I can’t help to imagine my life in ZJUI two years later .

Grade An Article

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Title : A-

The title of article about the peace monument can summarize the hole article well and state the theme precisly . However , it is a little long .

Thesis : A+

The thesis of article is very clear and meaningful .

Vivid Description of the Event : B

The essay illustrate the meaning of peace perfectly . Beacause the essay is the form which state the history , so the sentence in it are serious and not vivid .

Organization : A+

The structure of article is exact and logical .

Grammar and Style : A

Grammar is perfect . The style of this article is also fit the environment where it exists and what the essay was created to do .

Multimedia Artifacts

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Writing is a important part of my life which helps me to release my stress and enrich my lifestyle . As for me , I will use my pad or pen with paper to write articles . The picture is here : ,. And I usually write in my own room , because there is nothing to interupt me and I can think quietly . What’s more  , I always write notes when I read books and the book that I recently read is named ‘The Hungery Games’ . Photoes are as follows : , . When I write , I need to reffer to some help pages to find inspiration or learn several writing skills and I want to share it , which is http://www.qualres.org/ , http://www.zhihu.com and http://www.icourse163.org . From these webside I can not only get information about writing , but the knowledge about other courses . They are useful . In the future , I wish that I can post more rhetorical skills such as rhetorical triangle . I believe that rhetorical skills can improve my ability to polish setences and have a critical view point .

Exploring Topics

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  • Dear friends,
    I need to write a paper about an important topic for college. You know I am very worried about the environmental protection and whither the pollution of earth will lead to the extinction of human-being . But I actually don’t know that much about this issue. I plan to look for some sources that express other people’s opinions about this–especially those I disagree with–in order to figure out more about the topic.I wouid appreciate it if you could give me you precies suggestions .

feedback of critical response

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I felt sad that my response didn’t get a well grade and I want to say sorry to my professor . As far as I’m concerned , the reason of it is as follows : firstly , before I began to write the article , I failed to understand the meaning of teacher clearly . So I make many falses such as the wrong form (the MLA) , didn’t reach the limitation of words and so on . In the following days , I make up my mind to read the constructions carefully and do the work strictly . I wish I can correct my errors in grammer in the future . And I will make it a rule to read more books and practice reguarly , hoping to improve my hand-writing skills to get a better mask in the next homeworks.

2021.10.1