Critical Analysis #2


Reflection: In this version of my paper I fixed the minor mistakes I had in the original paper and added new information. For instance, when I stated an author I used their first name only when I should have used their last name. I also cited my quotes and added a works cited page for those interested in learning more about the authors. I used the comments Professor Mary left me to help me revise my paper. Revising my paper made me realize the importance of writing a paper. I made a lot of silly grammatical mistakes which could have been prevented if I took my time writing this paper.


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