My School’s Fake Shut Down


Reflection: This was my first major paper that was assigned, so it wasn’t the greatest. I forgot some parts to the toulmin analysis, had a lot of grammatical errors, didn’t have my works cited page in alphabetical order, and the title to my paper was weak. I was enrolled into Professor Mary’s rhet 105 class late, so I wasn’t there for the entire toulmin analysis lesson. However, I used the rubric and the side comments Professor Mary gave me to help me revise my paper. I tried my best fixing everything that was wrong, but it is safe to say it is better than the original.

Taken from the American Thinker
Taken from Smile Politely