MakeAmericasHealthImportantAgain
Reflection: In my original version of my annotated bibliography I received an A which I was proud of. Al I had were minor mistakes that can be easily fixed. In this version, I revised my working thesis, deleted some information, and fixed grammatical errors. I made my thesis a statement instead of a question. I fixed my thesis so that the reader can know which position I am taking. In my original version, I had some summarized parts of a source in my analysis paragraph, so I had to revise that. After I submitted my annotated bib, I found two other sources that I thought would be useful in my paper, so I decided to add those in this version as well. I mainly focused on Professor Mary’s side comments she left me to revise my paper. I used their notes and the rubric to see what I had to fix to make this version 10x better.
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