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After revising the critical response paper on the Illini Chief, I feel a lot better about the outcome of the paper. The main revisions I did was add more analysis. I also refurbished a lot of sentences to make the paper more concise overall. I feel like the paper is clean and easy to read now. I enjoyed watching and writing about the documentary. As a student who goes to the University of Illinois, I think it is important to know the history of the chief and how it may offend people on campus.