My critical response was not terrible, but I started off poorly. The title was awkward so I changed that immediately. I had citations without a works cited, which does not do any good. So, I made a works cited page to give proper credit to my sources. When reading over the paper, I decided to add more analysis. Also, I corrected all of professor Mary’s suggestions. I enjoyed writing this paper because I genuinely liked what the three authors were saying. Adler, Lamott, and Bradbury all had an important message that stuck with me.