Reflection of Critical Response

My critical response was not terrible, but I started off poorly. The title was awkward so I changed that immediately. I had citations without a works cited, which does not do any good. So, I made a works cited page to give proper credit to my sources. These were just a few suggestions made by professor Mary.  When reading over the paper, I decided to add more analysis. I added sentences that related to my opinion on the sources. For example, I talked about my own experiences with writing first drafts and how I count on them during my writing process. In addition, I said that Ray Bradbury encourages me to write with more passion. I enjoyed writing this paper because I genuinely liked what the three authors were saying. Adler, Lamott, and Bradbury all had an important message that stuck with me.

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