The structure of my essay is good, and I like my in-depth analyzation.
My stye of formatting is really rigid and full of cliche.
I should prove read my essay to avoid grammar errors.The sentences should also be more concise through deleting unnecessary words.
I read and appreciated essays from more accomplished writers to improve my style of writing. The writer’s center can also be used.
I should keep revising my essays until it satisfies me.