I believe that I wrote a good paper but I could have had much more depth to my analysis of the two articles.  I should have been more thorough with my analysis as I did not mention or identify any specific support to the arguments of the articles that I was discussing. One thing that I found was a big weakness of mine was that I did not have the right formatting in terms of my citations.

Some information that I used in the paper needed a citation and there was none present. This really made me think about how careful you have to be when using data and information from other sources and how serious it is to not credit the sources you use in your paper(s). I knew that plagiarism was a big problem but I never knew just how meticulous you have to be and I’m glad I learned that.