Critical Response #1 (Revised)

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RHET 102 Critical Response 1 revised

Reflection: Here the first step I took before making changes was to reread the whole essay. Then I looked up the assignment description and focused on points I missed. The changes I made were correctly stating the author of the aricle’s last name instead of first name because my audience is for an academic community. I italicized the title of the main article instead of putting quotation marks around it just in case I needed to quote something the author said directly from the text. I also added an attention grabbing sentence in the very beginning of the essay that summarizes what I am going to talk about and the aricle itself. Other than that grammar and punctuation were fixed.