Major Paper #2 Proposal & Annotated Bibliography (Revised)

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Rhet 102 Major Essay 2 Propsal Annotated bib revised

Reflection: Here the first step I took before making changes was to reread the whole essay. Then I looked up the assignment description and focused on points I missed. The changes I made were making a more clear thesis to my reader. This is so I could make my proposal more clear to focus on my research question. I had to change the language I was using so I wouldn’t confuse my audience on the sources I was using. I also misused some words and relaced them. I also added more emphasis on the importance to why I wanted to do the research and why it was important when my family memeber was involved. Other than that grammar and punctuation were fixed.