Major Paper #1 Rhetorical Analysis of a Source (Revised)

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Rhet 102 Major Essay 1 Rhetorical Analysis portfolio

Reflection: Here the first step I took before making changes was to reread the whole essay. Then I looked up the assignment description and focused on points I missed. The changes I made were stating directly the Toulmin Analysis vocab that were not in the essay originally. I also created a better title to let my reader know what they were specifically going to read before reviewing it. I also added more detail and added my own opinion in the paper. Some words were taken out to improve on the concise part of the essay. I also directly cited the source I used by adding quotation marks. Other than that grammar and punctuation were fixed.