Assignment 2 Reflection

The first change I made was the name of the response to label it correctly and I MLA formatted it correctly  too. One of the comments you made was asking me to make a stronger connection between Alder and the other sources, so after rereading “How to Mark a Book“, I rewrote my paragraph. Alder didn’t make a strong reference to having people revise your work, but self revision is key. Making small comments while reading and also writing down your thoughts will help incorporate more ideas into your work. Another mistake that I’ve been continuously making was referencing books as “novels.” I never knew that a novel only is a piece of fiction, so thank you for pointing that out to me. I fixed a lot of grammatical errors, mostly with quotation marks.