Essay 2 Reflection

For the revision of my annotated bibliography, I made sure to read Professor Mary’s comments and suggestions very carefully. I looked up the definition of a “novel” and it is defined as “A fictitious prose narrative of book length, typically representing character and action with some degree of realism” which does not describe my source so I changed “novel” to “book.” In the analysis of my first source, it seemed unclear that I meant the book includes citations by saying “it contains a bibliography of its own” so I made sure to clarify that it also contains citations for each graph and chart in the book. In one of my summaries, I stated that my source was biased which did not belong in the summary paragraph so I moved it to the analysis paragraph and changed the tense of the verb so it was grammatically correct. One error that I kept repeating was that I kept putting my opinion in the summary or analysis and it definitely does not belong in either so I just completely erased all my opinions from the paper.

Other than the major adjustments that I made, I also fixed small grammatical errors like unclear sentences that were missing words and slang vocabulary. My annotated bibliography now contains all the correct verb tenses and is formatted correctly without all the extra spacing.